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本文分幾個板塊分別介紹致謝的重要性、致謝可能存在的不足、書寫的致謝建議、幾個致謝樣板。
一. 致謝的重要性
1 國外學(xué)位論文的致謝一般處在論文封面和目錄之間。而國內(nèi)則放在正文之后。
2?博士學(xué)位論文的致謝部分是學(xué)位論文閱讀最廣泛的部分
According to one source, theAcknowledgements section of a Ph.D. dissertation is the most widely readsection.Whether you believe this or not, many individuals who helped you in the processof writing may check to see if, indeed, they have meant something to you.——WRITING ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS: Saying“Thank You”
1 態(tài)度抄襲：將學(xué)長的致謝拷入到自己的學(xué)位論文之中，僅替換姓名等名詞來當(dāng)作自己的致謝。
2 對導(dǎo)師和評委等進(jìn)行不合適的評價：在致謝中，存在對導(dǎo)師等人的學(xué)術(shù)水平和為人進(jìn)行評價的現(xiàn)象。致謝不是評語。
3?過度致謝：過度是指夸大其詞或無關(guān)致謝。不是所有人都能接受被過度致謝。
4 泄露隱私：被致謝對象都有自己的隱私（包括身份隱私和行為隱私）。?
5?遺漏：一般不會遺忘致謝導(dǎo)師以及一些身邊幫助過自己的人。但是，大多數(shù)論文的最終版沒有致謝那些給自己提供過有效建議的論文評閱人、答辯委員成員以及外部專家。?
6?致謝不規(guī)范：以博士論文為例，博士論文強(qiáng)調(diào)獨(dú)立工作的能力。然而，許多學(xué)生在致謝中，強(qiáng)調(diào)感謝導(dǎo)師“悉心指導(dǎo)”。
7?大發(fā)感慨：大發(fā)感慨表明自己抓住這次機(jī)會泄露情緒。致謝用于感謝別人，不是自己。
1?起稿前閱讀至少10份以上的致謝。閱讀別人的致謝后，再來書寫或者修改自己的致謝。?
2?確定致謝各段落的邏輯順序。?標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的致謝按順序包含五段內(nèi)容，第一段是對導(dǎo)師的致謝，第二段是對論文評閱人的致謝，第三段是對答辯委員會主席和提出問題需求的企業(yè)負(fù)責(zé)人的致謝，第四段是對工作過程中提供過數(shù)據(jù)和建設(shè)性建議的同行專家的致謝，第五段是對幫助過自己的實驗室人員和學(xué)校管理服務(wù)人員的致謝。
3?將致謝先呈現(xiàn)給導(dǎo)師看。?致謝寫好后，主動交給導(dǎo)師提建議。不同的導(dǎo)師可能對致謝風(fēng)格有不同理解，如果他認(rèn)為有不妥，可以按建議修改。?
4?在語言風(fēng)格上琢磨。?花數(shù)天時間去想到致謝中合適的詞匯，形成屬于自己的獨(dú)特語言。盡量使用通俗易懂的語句，避免使用難以理解和難以辨認(rèn)的古詞語。
5?多次補(bǔ)充致謝對象。預(yù)答辯前的草稿需要有致謝初稿。預(yù)答辯后加上預(yù)答辯中幫助過自己的專家。論文送審后加上值得感謝的論文評閱人。答辯后添加值得感謝的答辯委員會成員。?
首先，我謹(jǐn)向巴黎高職（ENSAM）教授、阿蘭.勒萊特（A. Lerat）先生表示深切的謝意，是他曾經(jīng)接納我開展這份博士論文工作，是他一直以來在熱心地關(guān)注我的工作。我要感謝他在我整個工作過程中提供建議和支持。
我也同樣地感謝巴黎第八大學(xué)的哈珀恩（L. Halpern）教授和法國國家科學(xué)研究中心（CNRS）的研究主管費(fèi)勒布瓦（F. Feuillebois）先生，感謝他們評閱了我的博士論文并作為答辯委員會專家參加我的答辯。
我也感謝巴黎第六大學(xué)教授吉勞德（J.-P. Guiraud）先生接受（作為答辯委員主席）參加我的博士論文答辯，感謝標(biāo)致雪鐵龍汽車集團(tuán)（PSA）的空氣熱化學(xué)研究主管吉諾特（S. Guinotte）夫人對本工作的支持與鼓勵。
我也不會忘記感謝標(biāo)致雪鐵龍汽車集團(tuán)的發(fā)動機(jī)物理實驗室負(fù)責(zé)人范諾貝爾（F. Vannobel）夫人給本研究提供了實驗結(jié)果支持和對本研究表現(xiàn)出的興趣，同樣感謝法國國家宇航研究局(ONERA)的部門助理主管塞德斯（J. Sides）先生，我們有過有趣的討論。
我必須感謝所有SINUMEF實驗室成員，尤其感謝達(dá)魯（V. Daru）夫人、卡爾法拉赫（K. Khalfallah）先生和拉孔貝（G. Lacombe）先生在科學(xué)層面的幫助以及友誼。也感謝希德爾（S. Sider）女士和師弟博萊爾（C. Borel）, 夏陽（P. Chaillant）, 科爾（C. Corre）, 羅羅（A. Raulot）和?拉威爾（J.-C. Ravel）的幫助和友誼。最后我要感謝圖書館和計算中心的所有成員，尤其感謝諾里根（Norigeon）先生和石井民（Ishiomin）先生提供的有用幫助。
一份情感型致謝
I?would like to first extend my gratitude to my family for all of the love andsupport they have given me throughout this journey.? My children, Hailey and Liam, have and willalways be my greatest accomplishments but they are also the reason why I havepushed myself so hard to achieve my dreams.?There is no limits to what you can accomplish as long as you stay trueto yourself and work hard for what you want.?I am so proud to be their mother and know that they both have thebrightest of futures in front of them.
To my husband, Phillip, who has supportedme and been my rock when things got tough and late nights and lack ofhousekeeping became the norm. You gave me the strength, and the help that Ineeded to push through those times and scale the walls that often blocked mefrom finishing.? I cannot tell you howgrateful I am to be able to?share this life with you and see what the world hasin store for us next.
To my parents and my aunt who alwaysreminded me how proud they are of me.?Especially my mother who during late night conversations would let meknow that I am strong and can do anything I set my mind to.? I know grandma and grandpa are also by myside in spirit cheering me on and standing proud.? I just wish they were here to see thisaccomplishment in person.? I love all ofyou so much and can’t express how much I appreciate your support andpatience.?
Dr. Alan Levine, Dr. Lia Richards-Palmiter,and Dr. Amy Paciej-Woodruff.? You haveall been the most amazing support system and mentors and I could not have askedfor a better dissertation committee.? Dr.Levine, you were a constant cheerleader, a mentor, a motivator, and you continuallychallenged me to consider other aspects of my dissertation that overall made mea better researcher.? I am forevergrateful for your guidance and support.?Dr. Richards-Palmiter, you have been a mentor to me for a great deallonger than this portion of my education.?You have made me strive to seek out my dreams and find my passion.? You are also a true friend andconfidant.? I am truly thankful to haveyou in my life and as a key member to help me achieve this degree.? Dr. Paciej-Woodruff, I have always admiredyou and felt honored to have you as a member of my committee.? Your mentorship and amazing advice truly madea big impact in achieving this dream and for that I am forever grateful.
I also want to thank my amazing coworkerswho have given me the strength and support that I needed to accomplish thisgreat feat.? Antonia, Bev, Michelle, Lia,and Meghan, you are the dearest of friends and the best coworkers a girl couldask for!? Being able to work on a dailybasis with such strong, intelligent, compassionate, and downright amazing womenis an honor and I know I am a better person because you are all in my life.
Finally, to my cohort of amazing doctoralstudents who have trudge along with me throughout the years, especially Meg,Brooke, Sr. Kevin, and Kim. You are such amazing women and I am honored to havegone on this journey with you.? You allhave made this experience one I will never forget.? Not only have you been great friends andsupporters but you have also shared your lives and experiences with me that Iwill forever embrace now as a part of the person I have become.? From the late night texts to the panic wefaced during this crazy pandemic, I am so thankful to have you all in my lives!
來源：Christina?R. Brundage，?An Examination of Racial/Ethnic Minority Student Engagement in Career DevelopmentActivities and Barriers to the Career Development Process While Attending aPredominantly White Institution of Higher Education: A Quantitative Case Study， PhD Dissertation,?MARYWOOD UNIVERSITY,?COLLEGE OF PROFESSIONAL STUDIES, May 2020
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